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L.C. Marino's avatar

I was a large propulsions systems mechanic on military ships for a decade before becoming a senior engineer for ships and submarines so my relationship with machines is tight and healthy. Because of this experience, I’ve also seen what happens when things go terribly wrong. It almost never ends well for anyone in close proximity to the unauthorized disassembly.

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Susan Earlam's avatar

Agree with this take, it did descend into hokey territory. What I got from this as a learning point for me was the dialogue: the back and forth between characters. Even though there's quite a few characters for such a short piece, each voice was distinctive.

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