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Wow! This is so amazing! Terrifying, poignant, sorrowful, touching, with characters so real and fully fleshed. excellent work! And Scoot's reading is impeccable.

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Scoot is amazing

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Scary and beautiful all at once. A love story filled with grief and terror. And that ending. Oof. Well done.

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This rocked, especially with the narration.

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Thanks Andy! Scoot is an amazing narrator.

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Wow. Great story. Thank you 😁

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Love never fails. Great story, Shaina. Thank you!

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She knew

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A bitter, sweet, horrifying love story that just melts my heart! Thank you Shaina!

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Thank you Frank!

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DAVIE AND LINDA!! 💔💔

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So well written

Pacing just right

Visceral

Characters are rich

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Wow, so good!

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Oh, Scoot! 👏

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Wow. I'm a bit speechless. Amazing writing. Took me on a wild ride. Dialogue ties the characters together, driving the story. I was totally in David's world and never left it, feeling what he felt. The genuine actions and subtleties are so palpable for me as a reader. This was incredible! Well done!

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