Just walked in fm a great day out. I fire up the desktop and saw your story. I immediately read it and loved every word of it. U have the ability to transform the reader into the situation and the feelings u are experiencing quite nicely. Bravo, Shaina! I'm looking forward to more of your sharing and writing, no qstn there!
Boy, this one has a real tingly edge to it... just enough uncertainty and tension to keep me all the way to the end... with a sweet soft landing that just seems right. Bravo Shaina!
Really well done, Shaina! I love this one. Tightly constructed.
Just walked in fm a great day out. I fire up the desktop and saw your story. I immediately read it and loved every word of it. U have the ability to transform the reader into the situation and the feelings u are experiencing quite nicely. Bravo, Shaina! I'm looking forward to more of your sharing and writing, no qstn there!
Boy, this one has a real tingly edge to it... just enough uncertainty and tension to keep me all the way to the end... with a sweet soft landing that just seems right. Bravo Shaina!