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Whoa … tense … twisting this way and that. Super believable. Loved the inner voice dialogue. Fabulous writing.

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You only hit homeruns, this lights out series is incredible.

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great Shaina!!

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Nice twist! 🤌

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That is so clever I can't even begin to describe. 9.5/ 10. (only becases I bet you have written something even better than this) absolutely riveting and compact - no words wasted.

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Nick thank you! Means so much.

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Holy...that was seriously intense. Amazing twist. I loved this.

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Wow, that was a great plot twist! I didn't see it coming at all!

Very well done, Shaina.

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Great twist at the end!

Excellent

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Got me with the Uno Reverse card. Fun!

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O that was so creepy... I fell for it completely and then trap dropped! Sweet and so horrifying... perfect Shaina!

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