A Lights Out Story
Whoa … tense … twisting this way and that. Super believable. Loved the inner voice dialogue. Fabulous writing.
You only hit homeruns, this lights out series is incredible.
great Shaina!!
Nice twist! 🤌
That is so clever I can't even begin to describe. 9.5/ 10. (only becases I bet you have written something even better than this) absolutely riveting and compact - no words wasted.
Nick thank you! Means so much.
Holy...that was seriously intense. Amazing twist. I loved this.
Wow, that was a great plot twist! I didn't see it coming at all!
Very well done, Shaina.
Great twist at the end!
Excellent
Got me with the Uno Reverse card. Fun!
O that was so creepy... I fell for it completely and then trap dropped! Sweet and so horrifying... perfect Shaina!
Great! So good, the building tension, this story definitely had it. Then ended with a POW.
Whoa … tense … twisting this way and that. Super believable. Loved the inner voice dialogue. Fabulous writing.
You only hit homeruns, this lights out series is incredible.
great Shaina!!
Nice twist! 🤌
That is so clever I can't even begin to describe. 9.5/ 10. (only becases I bet you have written something even better than this) absolutely riveting and compact - no words wasted.
Nick thank you! Means so much.
Holy...that was seriously intense. Amazing twist. I loved this.
Wow, that was a great plot twist! I didn't see it coming at all!
Very well done, Shaina.
Great twist at the end!
Excellent
Got me with the Uno Reverse card. Fun!
O that was so creepy... I fell for it completely and then trap dropped! Sweet and so horrifying... perfect Shaina!
Great! So good, the building tension, this story definitely had it. Then ended with a POW.