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Absolutely creepy. Enjoyed this horror story!

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Thank you John!

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Dark. I loved it!

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Woah! Thats absolutely brilliant Shaina. Could not stop reading it. Desperate for this not to be all there is of this horrific dystopia? Huge round of applause from me. This is the sort of thing I wish I was writing right now.

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Mad scientists inside. Enter at your own risk.

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Chilling, Shaina. Absolutely chilling.

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Thank you Hanna ❤️

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Excellent story telling

Wow!

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Everybody has their price, even when they don't know what part of themselves is being bought...tragic all around but more real than we want to believe! A vicious heart rending story that I couldn't put down Shaina, whew!

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An emotional roller coaster. Curious, sad, then scared!

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Thank you so much for reading Jared!

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Really enjoyed this, Shaina! Captured my attention the entire way through, no small feat! I'll be thinking about this one all day.

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🙏

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That ending took me by surprise. Great story.

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Thanks so much for reading!

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why do you post these in the morning??? WHY DO I READ THEM?!

Is the "serpent" in serpent-chip what I think it is? This is wonderfully done. Well. You know what I mean.

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So you can enjoy your breakfast! And yes, the serpent in serpent-chip is exactly what you think it is.

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i need to know about serpent chips.... not the sort you have with an avocado dip, presumably?

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Bahahahaha! No, thank goodness 😅

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