I like the character building or definition that is going on in this chapter. I'm not sure I agree that this really could stand on it's own as you suggested Shaina. But on I go, wondering where! Thanks
I feel like I'm getting to know Stimp. He has self-control that manifests in unusual ways.
I sense something big about to happen when he looks at 3's door. Earlier, when he's smoking marijuana, "it helped get him through some cold, hard nights with a good attitude" raises a question that isn't answered, though it may be later.
The paragraph starting "he reached the third floor" has a wee typo. There should be no apostrophe in "theirs".
I like the character building or definition that is going on in this chapter. I'm not sure I agree that this really could stand on it's own as you suggested Shaina. But on I go, wondering where! Thanks
That’s great feedback. I got to this weeks episode and thought the same thing. I’ll have to go back and edit a few. Some do better than others.
I feel like I'm getting to know Stimp. He has self-control that manifests in unusual ways.
I sense something big about to happen when he looks at 3's door. Earlier, when he's smoking marijuana, "it helped get him through some cold, hard nights with a good attitude" raises a question that isn't answered, though it may be later.
The paragraph starting "he reached the third floor" has a wee typo. There should be no apostrophe in "theirs".