It was a surprise to me that Stimp actually stood up to that challenge, at least so far. Especially given his precarious position. Does he realize the force that he is dealing with, or has he a greater fear that is propping him up?
The pastor gives me the worst kind of creeps. Your writing is so evocative, so dialed in on the emotions of the characters in the scene. It is genuinely palpable.
It was a surprise to me that Stimp actually stood up to that challenge, at least so far. Especially given his precarious position. Does he realize the force that he is dealing with, or has he a greater fear that is propping him up?
The pastor gives me the worst kind of creeps. Your writing is so evocative, so dialed in on the emotions of the characters in the scene. It is genuinely palpable.
Really dying to see how this concludes!
Thank you so much Michael! I really appreciate you taking the time to comment! This was a hard story for me to write and your comment means the world.